Fat Man
#8
the feedback apart from rowans isn't really helping the poet.
give more than a one liner

why are the ideas liked?
what picture was painted?
how does it sound like an american love story, why american as opposed to british or other love story?

better not to leave feedback than a one liner that says almost nothing .
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Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-28-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Blake - 01-28-2014, 05:52 AM
RE: Fat Man - by tectak - 06-16-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-29-2014, 02:56 AM
RE: Fat Man - by rowens - 01-29-2014, 07:34 AM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 01-29-2014, 11:31 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Zainabk - 01-29-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Fat Man - by Veil of Trash - 01-29-2014, 02:36 PM
RE: Fat Man - by billy - 01-29-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Fat Man - by LeoEvans - 06-24-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: Fat Man - by nicksherman - 06-24-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: Fat Man - by LeoEvans - 06-24-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Fat Man - by LorettaYoung - 06-24-2014, 06:26 AM
RE: Fat Man - by John Galt - 06-24-2014, 06:48 AM
RE: Fat Man - by vagabond - 07-04-2014, 06:21 AM



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