01-28-2014, 08:26 AM
I like this very much as it has developed. Your heroine reminds me a little of George Sand, who had a series of lovers, plus husband, including Chopin, and the author of the book on which the opera 'Carmen' is based, (Mérimée) and Alfred de Musset. Her writings were quite anti-establishment at the time. Then, of a sudden, she decided to play the graceful grand-mother, wrote books of a very different sort, and was altogether a good egg.
As it happens, I profoundly disagree with your heroine: as long as there is peroxide available, were I a woman, I'd use it --but I ain't. I think it a good example of workshopping -- plenty of you remains, and it is you who have chosen to accept or reject suggestions.
As it happens, I profoundly disagree with your heroine: as long as there is peroxide available, were I a woman, I'd use it --but I ain't. I think it a good example of workshopping -- plenty of you remains, and it is you who have chosen to accept or reject suggestions.