My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade
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(01-26-2014, 02:41 AM)milo)' Wrote:  Is this a new metaphor of a couple that are like fire and ice? That's great, I wish i'd thought of that. Still I guess I could write a poem about an inuk romance where a literal lava owner meets a literal ice owner. Thumbsup Go for it. Smile

Maybe someone else will come by and point out other things more in the style that you like and you can use those instead.

Yes, I hope so as well. Wink it would be fair in the context of what the forum considers a relevant/comprehensive type of critique.

I always take on board what people - including yourself - point out. Though I find sarcasm neither necessary nor helpful.
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My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:15 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:51 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:54 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Todd - 01-27-2014, 01:30 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Blake - 01-28-2014, 05:56 AM



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