01-26-2014, 02:53 AM
Yes I think what you suggested would help, though I do think that final bit you have could work depending on what comes before. Why shouldn't we forget the names?
Also, imo "building step by step by step civilization's frame" is the preachiest part. If you replaced that line it might solve the problem.
Also, imo "building step by step by step civilization's frame" is the preachiest part. If you replaced that line it might solve the problem.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.