My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade
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The piece of flat, floating ice is commonly referred to as an 'ice floe'. The hyphen wasn't necessary.

Re 'half a critique': My take on this philosophy would be that it's better to say nothing than almost nothing at all. Wink

Donna

(01-26-2014, 01:51 AM)milo Wrote:  I don't want to spend more time than it took to write the poem.
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Ok if a floe is ice, what is an ice-floe?

(Half a critique is better than none, I always say)
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Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.
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My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:15 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:41 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:51 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:13 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:20 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:03 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Todd - 01-27-2014, 01:30 AM
RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Blake - 01-28-2014, 05:56 AM



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