My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade

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My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade

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01-26-2014, 01:38 AM

milo Wrote:Crushed my spirit
Defiled my dreams
Word to the wise
Muddled mayhem

Ugh.

Now now milo, that's no way to critique a poem.

I'll be there in a minute.

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My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 01:12 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:15 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by newsclippings - 01-26-2014, 01:38 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:41 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by newsclippings - 01-26-2014, 01:44 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:51 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:05 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:07 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:13 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:20 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:35 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:41 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-26-2014, 02:54 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by newsclippings - 01-26-2014, 01:54 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 01:58 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by newsclippings - 01-26-2014, 02:00 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by milo - 01-26-2014, 02:03 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Leanne - 01-26-2014, 06:42 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-27-2014, 12:58 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Todd - 01-27-2014, 01:30 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by DonMar - 01-28-2014, 02:35 AM

RE: My Hand Knows the Way to the Blade - by Blake - 01-28-2014, 05:56 AM

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