Coming of Age, Again (Give an Inch) edit #4.1

[milo]

Thanks, milo, that was just what I wanted, something meaty to work with.

The only point I don't understand is

"She fought it then she caved and tried" lacks the tension needed for truth.

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Do you mean the wording or the idea?

Thanks so much for your time with this.

So let's say I was an hour late to pick you up for our yoga date and of course it was because of that new frozen yogurt place so when I finally get there I toss off the flip "I fought it then I caved and tried" as one phrase just like that, would you believe that I fought it at all?