01-24-2014, 07:42 AM
oh ok, cool. so you're sardonic [dryly cynical] because something is unfinished, and that involves you being in some way dirt.
that's the prose paraphrase, and unless you're talking generically - which i can't think what you could be talking about except heartbreak, i'm still lost on what the poem is about. obviously that's deliberate?
i think "far above" is a bit off, but i dunno, perhaps it makes the statement seem wordy and so a bit too formal maybe
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that's the prose paraphrase, and unless you're talking generically - which i can't think what you could be talking about except heartbreak, i'm still lost on what the poem is about. obviously that's deliberate?
i think "far above" is a bit off, but i dunno, perhaps it makes the statement seem wordy and so a bit too formal maybe
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