Sardonic

[clemonz]

yeah i liked the last line too, but don't think i understand it - you're saying that they treat your brother badly?

i'm not familiar with your poems, but you seem to be groping for something.
i quite like it, perhaps because of that coupled with it seeming self sufficient.

Sardonic? I guess I am—
sardonic look, sardonic grin

i think this is my favourite statement, it reads a little confrontational.