01-24-2014, 12:46 AM
(01-18-2014, 09:32 PM)Erthona Wrote: .Your triple use of the word sardonic in just 2 lines plays it out a bit, but overall I like this one.
Sardonic? I guess I am—
sardonic look, sardonic grin.
When did this sardonic…..ness begin?
Is it because I am contemptuous of others, I'm not sure I like this line
thinking my intellect far above my brother’s?
Unfinished. Ask if it is because of anger, or fear.
No it is because of hurt,
incomplete
when made of dirt.
–Erthona
Thanks for the read,
Sandra
I'll be there in a minute.

