The Spell.

[billy]

I like it. Very evocative.

Just a minor quibble; in the last stanza, I found "glitter-ball night" to be a rather distracting image, that didn't fit perfectly in with the rest of the images. Also, I really feel I might be missing the significance of that one-line stanza, "nature drops a stitch", and why its separated/ what meaning it drives, because to me it seems like the least evocative line, yet its highlighted.

holy disco dancing dingos batman i see your point.
i think i may gave been trying to hard to be poetic with the glitter ball nights.

i'll have a think about the lone line. thanks for the feedback addy. i'll leave it a while in the hope of a bit more feedback and do an edit.