The garden of eden
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(01-22-2014, 10:06 AM)Erthona Wrote:  I don't get the "ready salted" phrase, but I suspect that has to do with my lack of knowledge. Otherwise, very succinct.

Dale
Thanks Dale The ready salted bit is a packet of crisps.Best Keith

(01-22-2014, 10:45 AM)BedsideFungus Wrote:  Right or wrong, my first thought was that salty taste skins takes when it perspires all day. This was reinforced with the shared cola on a stoop. Hopefully that's what you were going for. If not, ignore me for I know my mind is a trifle warped. Smile

AND I left out that I found it charming, a little sentimental, and it makes me think of childhood.
Thanks BedsideFungus I was going fr crisps and coke on a step with a maybe someone else. Glad you liked it best Keith.

(01-22-2014, 11:41 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  Ready salted - the chips? Nice snapshot of time and place. I like the warm/worn sounds and the suggestion of intimacy in two thin straws.
Thanks JM, you have it all, and this is still my favorite combo. Best Keith

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Messages In This Thread
The garden of eden - by Keith - 01-22-2014, 09:38 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by Erthona - 01-22-2014, 10:06 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by Keith - 01-23-2014, 08:46 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by just mercedes - 01-22-2014, 11:41 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by billy - 01-23-2014, 09:03 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by Keith - 01-23-2014, 09:19 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: The garden of eden - by Keith - 02-03-2014, 10:11 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by bena - 02-04-2014, 06:50 AM
RE: The garden of eden - by Keith - 02-06-2014, 07:41 AM



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