01-23-2014, 01:00 AM
Thanks, dale,
I'm just learning, I didn't know sonnets had to be pentameter (?), guess I need a title change on edit.
Is L8 the only line that's off? I don't mind rewriting, it's an exercise while I'm waiting for a real poem.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. While appearance may seem frivolous, it can be a small step on the way down to other compromises. Myself, I've gotten pretty tolerant of someone else's quirks, and demand a lot of tolerance in return.
Tinfoil hats are pretty easy to fashion from the neighbor's trash.
I'm just learning, I didn't know sonnets had to be pentameter (?), guess I need a title change on edit.
Is L8 the only line that's off? I don't mind rewriting, it's an exercise while I'm waiting for a real poem
. I'm glad you enjoyed it. While appearance may seem frivolous, it can be a small step on the way down to other compromises. Myself, I've gotten pretty tolerant of someone else's quirks, and demand a lot of tolerance in return.
Tinfoil hats are pretty easy to fashion from the neighbor's trash.
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