Three A.M.

[71degrees]

Though I am probably not one to comment, I found the style and context of the original hauntingly familar.

Actually, I wish sometimes more folks would comment. Thanks.

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i enjoyed the poem but not the line breaks.
i'm probably way off the mark here but the poem has a sexual connotation for me;

my lover has
forgotten the words
and I am left to hum
only the melody

the spider door images are good. there's a sense of being trapped in them.

i wish i could give a more helpful crit

People see different things in poems, Billy. As for the line breaks, you may not have seen Revision #3