01-22-2014, 05:57 AM
Quote:All the things I can't say I drinki find the bit in bold appealing, but don't really understand why you wrote it like that - assuming they are three distinct clauses.
Golden Monkeys in plastic silence, I
miss those I never knew--
and just like you I find
debilitation more warming than
parents decorating trees for their son who
stalks longboards on Broadway and
Fifth.
?
the second stanza makes me think they're having sex on your desk, which is confusing, but i'll take your word for it.
