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really plased with this short poem

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01-21-2014, 04:08 PM

i was thinking it could have been a bit shorter Hysterical

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on a serious note. i thought of white noise as the last line and it sort of worked.

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really plased with this short poem - by clemonz - 01-21-2014, 06:13 AM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by clemonz - 01-21-2014, 06:23 AM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 06:31 AM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by clemonz - 01-21-2014, 06:34 AM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by Veil of Trash - 01-21-2014, 02:05 PM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by billy - 01-21-2014, 04:08 PM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by clemonz - 01-22-2014, 04:24 AM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by Erthona - 01-21-2014, 06:25 PM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 08:04 PM

RE: really plased with this short poem - by gslegrá - 02-02-2014, 09:30 PM

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