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To Byron
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01-21-2014, 03:49 PM
Great sonnet - you make the whole package seem so effortless, the rhymes and meter smoothly carrying the images and thoughts. Vocab that pins the age (ponder, venal) but a modern final couplet. Didn't his heart fail to burn at that final bbq on the beach? That memory made me a little uneasy with the image of dust. Don't know why.
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RE: To Byron - by just mercedes - 01-23-2014, 08:41 AM
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