as a peon (poetically speaking) i can't say anything but loved it. i suppose i could dissect and try to look respectful while doing so but fuck me, why bother. the poem for me is a job done. Byron would hold you to him and say thank you leanne,
i found the poem articulate with lots of good word use, loved the run ons and the superb couplet. the phrase deep depravity is something i've heard many times but so what, in this instance it's perfect for the poem.
i simply enjoyed it. i'd also add, "i'm not jealous" if anything i'm glad you write this well. it gives me please to read such poetry. thanks for the read.
i just saw this was originally posted a good while ago, wish i hadn't missed it, it's hogworthy to say the least.
i found the poem articulate with lots of good word use, loved the run ons and the superb couplet. the phrase deep depravity is something i've heard many times but so what, in this instance it's perfect for the poem.
i simply enjoyed it. i'd also add, "i'm not jealous" if anything i'm glad you write this well. it gives me please to read such poetry. thanks for the read.
i just saw this was originally posted a good while ago, wish i hadn't missed it, it's hogworthy to say the least.