Arrivederci e Grazie (edit 1: Rowens, tomoffing)
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The breaks are disrupting this for me too. A couple of them seem forced.

Squatting naked on a shredder is the best line I've read in weeks!

Would you consider a break in your final line???
"I'm only a little more important
than lube on a Sunday morning."

closes really starkly.
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RE: Arrivederci e Grazie - by rowens - 01-21-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: Arrivederci e Grazie - by tomoffing - 01-21-2014, 09:06 AM
RE: Arrivederci e Grazie - by newsclippings - 01-21-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Arrivederci e Grazie (edit 1: Rowens, tomoffing) - by rowens - 01-22-2014, 02:33 AM
RE: Arrivederci e Grazie (edit 1: Rowens, tomoffing) - by Sequel - 01-28-2014, 02:58 AM



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