In The Night of My Revelation
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I really like this poem! Your word choice is really good. This is my favorite
In the dream, I saw angels,
disenfranchised, tumble like tears
down the face of the moon,
silent as death, and bleak
as a baby's last breath.
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In The Night of My Revelation - by DonMar - 01-21-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: In The Night of My Revelation - by kingmicahde - 01-21-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: In The Night of My Revelation - by tomoffing - 01-21-2014, 09:32 AM
RE: In The Night of My Revelation - by billy - 01-21-2014, 09:56 AM
RE: In The Night of My Revelation - by DonMar - 01-21-2014, 04:53 PM



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