01-21-2014, 08:52 AM
I really like this poem! Your word choice is really good. This is my favorite
In the dream, I saw angels,
disenfranchised, tumble like tears
down the face of the moon,
silent as death, and bleak
as a baby's last breath.
In the dream, I saw angels,
disenfranchised, tumble like tears
down the face of the moon,
silent as death, and bleak
as a baby's last breath.