Fatherhood (Edit 3)
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Fatherhood Revision 3

Yesterday…

I laid on my beanbag watching TV,
Games consumed a great deal of my free time.
I listened to music rather loudly,
I thought I was living my life sublime.

Today…

Each and every day I watch cartoons,
As I become a walking spit-magnet.
Unable to sleep for so many moons,
It may sound awful, but I'm not dead yet.

Tomorrow…

I required my world be turned upside down
Before I could see it was right-side up.
I’d never turn 'round, I’d never go back,
Deep into fatherhood, I move forward.


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Fatherhood Revision 2

Yesterday…

I laid on my beanbag watching TV,
Games consumed a great deal of my free time.
I listened to music rather loudly,
I thought I was living my life sublime.

Today…

Each and every day I watch cartoons,
As I become a walking spit-magnet.
Unable to sleep for so many moons,
One would think my life is filled with regret.

Tomorrow…

I required my world be turned upside down
Before I could see it was right-side up.
I’d never turn 'round, I’d never go back,
Deep into fatherhood, I move forward.
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Fatherhood Revision 1

Yesterday…

I laid on my beanbag watching TV,
Games consumed a great deal of my free time.
I listened to music rather loudly,
I thought I was living my life sublime.

Today…

Each and every day I watch kids’ shows,
As I become a walking spit-magnet.
Sleep, a thing of the past. My sweet repose.
You would think my life is filled with regret.

Tomorrow…

I required my world be turned upside down
Before I could see it was right-side up.
I’d never turn round, I’d never go back,
From here on out I only move forward.
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Decided to try something a bit different.

Fatherhood

Yesterday…

I laid on my beanbag watching TV,
Games consumed a great deal of my free time.
I listened to music rather loudly,
I thought I was living my life sublime.

Today…

I watch Veggie Tales each and every day,
It’s a good day if I don’t get puked on.
An out of reach treasure, for sleep I pray.
It would seem to most that my life is gone.

Onward…

We require our worlds be turned upside down
Before we can see they are right-side up.
I’d never turn round, I’d never go back,
From here on out I only move forward.
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Messages In This Thread
Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 08:16 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by kingmicahde - 01-21-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: Fatherhood - by Blake - 01-21-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 1) - by kingmicahde - 01-21-2014, 09:28 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 2) - by Blake - 01-22-2014, 12:59 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 2) - by ellajam - 01-22-2014, 02:40 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by Blake - 01-22-2014, 04:21 AM
RE: Fatherhood (Edit 3) - by clemonz - 01-22-2014, 04:48 AM



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