To Byron

[clemonz]

You need not ponder changes wrought by age,
my vain and venal baron, for the truth
of you

"truth / of you", i thought was a nice line break.

more generally, the poem didn't massively appeal to me emotionally, but you made the form seem natural and easy [i maybe can't say why], so perhaps that's just my preference for styles of speech that are more direct than terms like

venal baron.. ungreying page... dwell eternally [in youth]... deep depravity

obviously i'm pretty new, so thanks for the opportunity to learn from you