01-20-2014, 09:43 PM
Thank you all for your comments and helpful feedback.
(Mercedes, I'd like to think the poem shook the earth beneath your feet.
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I've made some changes in the meantime. After posting Revision A, I posted another version underneath that one. In Revision B, I've changed S1 completely. I'd be interested to know what you think of either of the revisions.
Donna
(Mercedes, I'd like to think the poem shook the earth beneath your feet.
)I've made some changes in the meantime. After posting Revision A, I posted another version underneath that one. In Revision B, I've changed S1 completely. I'd be interested to know what you think of either of the revisions.
Donna
Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.