Open House /edit#1
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Thanks, clemonz, I'm not a fan of poems asking me questions either, but I wrote it anyway. Smile

I like to put the past and present in because for me that is life, but it often doesn't work well.

Silent feet is bad, if I wasn't there how do I know they were silent? Leaving no footprints? Nah, I'll change it.

Thanks for reading and for your helpful comment.
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Open House /edit#1 - by ellajam - 01-19-2014, 10:12 PM
RE: Open House - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 04:23 AM
RE: Open House - by ellajam - 01-20-2014, 04:46 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by justcloudy - 01-20-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by ellajam - 01-20-2014, 09:45 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by justcloudy - 01-20-2014, 09:52 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by ellajam - 01-20-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by billy - 01-20-2014, 10:32 AM
RE: Open House /edit#1 - by ellajam - 01-20-2014, 10:51 AM



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