01-20-2014, 04:46 AM
Thanks, clemonz, I'm not a fan of poems asking me questions either, but I wrote it anyway. 
I like to put the past and present in because for me that is life, but it often doesn't work well.
Silent feet is bad, if I wasn't there how do I know they were silent? Leaving no footprints? Nah, I'll change it.
Thanks for reading and for your helpful comment.

I like to put the past and present in because for me that is life, but it often doesn't work well.
Silent feet is bad, if I wasn't there how do I know they were silent? Leaving no footprints? Nah, I'll change it.
Thanks for reading and for your helpful comment.
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