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Millstone
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01-16-2014, 10:09 PM
Edit 2 is posted. I have modified the opening and closing and tied in the title better with the dread of winter theme by using a mill reference in the body of the poem as recomended by billy and trueE. Thanks for the critiques!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-07-2014, 10:28 PM
RE: Millstone - by ChessPiece - 01-07-2014, 10:40 PM
RE: Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-08-2014, 01:28 AM
RE: Millstone - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: Millstone - by billy - 01-08-2014, 08:56 AM
RE: Millstone - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 09:26 AM
RE: Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-08-2014, 07:34 PM
RE: Millstone (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 01-09-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 10:09 PM
RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by Brownlie - 01-23-2014, 02:29 PM
RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 01-24-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: Millstone (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 01-24-2014, 11:39 PM
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