01-16-2014, 05:37 PM
Vacant base ment sunny vacations...
Waiting by the wave length of funny orations
I thought the rhythm of these lines stuck out in a good way from the rest of the poem, but had a hard time understanding the purpose of the ellipsis. I also found the last two lines somewhat difficult and confusing. Thanks for sharing your work, it was interesting.
Waiting by the wave length of funny orations
I thought the rhythm of these lines stuck out in a good way from the rest of the poem, but had a hard time understanding the purpose of the ellipsis. I also found the last two lines somewhat difficult and confusing. Thanks for sharing your work, it was interesting.