Out of the labyrinth

[Blake]

Hi Blake thanks for commenting I'm not very structured in anything I do, I guess it was intentional as I looked at it and thought it still sounded ok I did try to bounce Red off leg and Cry off cer so I did make some attempt just not on the end rhymes. thanks keith

I can see why you left those words as cerulean is a pretty nice word and bight is also a good one. Both words are a bit hard to replace with a direct synonym without losing effect.

I'm a sucker for big, descriptive words and rhymes. That also is likely my downfall