The Paliform Precipice Part I

[Blake]

How to join the Sewer and Pig's Arse

If you like the word inversion that's your choice, your poem. If you'd like to read some unforced poems in strict forms, try looking through the practice threads for a start, it's got the rules for each form and some pretty amazing and beautifully readable examples by members.

Thanks I will check that out. And while I do enjoy inversion, I also enjoy my works being readable. So I will try to make some revisions. Revising a long poem is daunting so might take me a bit. Depends how whether or not the baby sleeps.