The Paliform Precipice Part I

[Blake]

And most of the reason I made it to the end is because I wanted to know what happened, so that's a big point in its favor.

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Just a thought-- might be interesting to see the other version of this one.

Thanks, its good to know the story aspect was compelling. I will have to check how far back my google drive revisions go to see if I still have the old one.