01-15-2014, 02:50 AM
(01-14-2014, 09:18 AM)Keith Wrote: I drowned crystal cerulean,I find it odd that the bolded words do not rhyme while the rest of the piece does. Was this intentional, or were you simply trying to avoid using a forced rhyme? I enjoyed reading this though, very nice.
whitewashed days away,
heavy on the oceans bight,
a fallen feathered stray.
Tar stains on my back
cannot blemish me,
wax runs red to legs,
the sun has set me free.

