Out of the labyrinth

Out of the labyrinth

Keith

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01-14-2014, 11:11 PM

(01-14-2014, 11:22 AM)milo Wrote:
(01-14-2014, 09:18 AM)Keith Wrote: Laughter trails behind us,
faster beats the breast,
cliff tops drop beneath us,
sea breeze glide to rest.
"glides"

also "faster beats the breast" is inverted.

Thanks Milo I have made some changes Smile

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

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Messages In This Thread

Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-14-2014, 09:18 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by milo - 01-14-2014, 11:22 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-14-2014, 11:11 PM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by ChristopherSea - 01-14-2014, 11:21 PM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-15-2014, 06:49 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Blake - 01-16-2014, 05:15 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-16-2014, 08:28 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Blake - 01-15-2014, 02:50 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Codry - 01-15-2014, 11:55 PM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-16-2014, 04:59 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by rowens - 01-15-2014, 11:57 PM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 05:20 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by YouAreMe - 01-16-2014, 11:28 AM

RE: Out of the labyrinth - by Keith - 01-20-2014, 10:38 AM

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