Night Moves

[Heartafire]

I think this is a rather unique piece, I like it very much. I think I might choose another word rather than acquainted to describe the feeling of awkwardness or having grown apart in the first stanza, no longer comfortable or at ease with you. Regarding the line breaks, when you are reading your poem I think the line breaks should fall where you feel them. This has fine potential, you can make something really great with this.
Heart