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Blake

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01-14-2014, 07:37 AM

(01-14-2014, 07:23 AM)rowens Wrote: I can see what you want me to see, but you're wasting words saying something so simple just to match syllables and force rhymes.

Agreed, when I wrote this one my goal in mind was in fact imagery.

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Morning Fog - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 03:07 AM

RE: Morning Fog - by rowens - 01-14-2014, 07:23 AM

RE: Morning Fog - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 07:37 AM

RE: Morning Fog - by rowens - 01-14-2014, 08:09 AM

RE: Morning Fog - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 08:13 AM

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