Night Moves
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(01-13-2014, 10:47 AM)71degrees Wrote:  I am no longer acquainted
with you;
when you speak to me
I do not know
what to say
I am no longer acquainted with you; when you speak to me I do not know what to say.

I am curious what criteria you are using for line breaks. I am also curious what you think distinguishes this from flat prose.
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Night Moves - by 71degrees - 01-13-2014, 10:47 AM
RE: Night Moves - by milo - 01-13-2014, 10:59 AM
RE: Night Moves - by just mercedes - 01-13-2014, 01:24 PM
RE: Night Moves - by 71degrees - 01-14-2014, 08:51 AM
RE: Night Moves - by milo - 01-14-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: Night Moves - by 71degrees - 01-15-2014, 09:06 AM
RE: Night Moves - by Heartafire - 01-14-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: Night Moves - by ellajam - 01-15-2014, 01:07 PM
RE: Night Moves - by 71degrees - 01-16-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Night Moves - by ellajam - 01-16-2014, 05:08 AM
RE: Night Moves - by 71degrees - 01-16-2014, 11:09 AM
RE: Night Moves - by ellajam - 01-16-2014, 11:21 AM



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