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Silence
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01-12-2014, 12:27 PM
I love the story that is being brought to life, however the flow and wording could be adjusted slightly to make it more pleasant to read. I'm not saying it's a bad read, I'm simply saying that I like things that flow fluently from my tongue when I read them aloud and when I'm simply just reading them. Thanks for sharing
"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Silence - by SunRose - 08-15-2013, 11:36 AM
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RE: Silence - by ChristopherSea - 08-15-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: Silence - by 1skylande1 - 08-17-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: Silence - by FlipFlop - 08-18-2013, 04:40 AM
RE: Silence - by TheWall0912 - 08-19-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Silence - by lukeJones - 08-20-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: Silence - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Silence - by billy - 08-21-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: Silence - by FayandFire - 08-22-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Silence - by mwhite0017 - 08-29-2013, 11:30 AM
RE: Silence - by cheyrn - 01-08-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: Silence - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 10:43 AM
RE: Silence - by teejai - 01-12-2014, 12:27 PM
RE: Silence - by tomoffing - 01-12-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Silence - by Mikeodial - 01-16-2014, 11:49 AM
RE: Silence - by Blake - 01-17-2014, 07:40 AM
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