01-11-2014, 06:11 AM
I always like reading sonnets here. Thanks for the opportunity.
My only criticism is that the volta isn't very strong, if even there at all. I was expecting it to move from gloomy to happy, or maybe gloomy to less gloomy. But the sestet pretty much had the same feel as the octave.
Besides that, it has a lot of emotion. It actually made me feel sad. Well done.
My only criticism is that the volta isn't very strong, if even there at all. I was expecting it to move from gloomy to happy, or maybe gloomy to less gloomy. But the sestet pretty much had the same feel as the octave.
Besides that, it has a lot of emotion. It actually made me feel sad. Well done.
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!