Silence

[cheyrn]

I am hopelessly biased by content. The story and the way that it is expressed, captures my attention. It invokes clear imagery for me and I have an emotional response.

Caps one every line is slighty unappealig to me. I think that:

She takes me away from the commotion
Behind the scenes

is one sentence. If that is the case, it is confusing to have the upper-case B.

I identify with the final parts about disbelief. That was how it was one someone I knew died. I seemed to have no emotional reaction and found that disturbing. But, it was partly because I was in shock.