entropy v4

[milo]

Could you ask to have it moved? Much obliged. I'll work on my own scansion in the meantime.

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I guess it's pushing through the screw-it moments that makes you good eventually, and I've had a dozen with this one. But I'm learning to take it, which is awesome. I can't believe how responsive y'all have been tonight. Such a blessing

he's around here somewhere, probably sniffing for cheese.

I would suggest making a new mentoring thread so not to have it mucked up.