Millstone

Millstone

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01-08-2014, 08:49 AM

You're not much for active poems are you? It lays it on thick but I think the richness works well with much of the imagery for the most part. I like the allusions. You might want to reconsider the break on the telly, abstract "bane" especially almost right out of the gate.

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Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-07-2014, 10:28 PM

RE: Millstone - by ChessPiece - 01-07-2014, 10:40 PM

RE: Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-08-2014, 01:28 AM

RE: Millstone - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 08:49 AM

RE: Millstone - by billy - 01-08-2014, 08:56 AM

RE: Millstone - by trueenigma - 01-08-2014, 09:26 AM

RE: Millstone - by ChristopherSea - 01-08-2014, 07:34 PM

RE: Millstone (edit 1) - by ChristopherSea - 01-09-2014, 12:48 AM

RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 01-16-2014, 10:09 PM

RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by Brownlie - 01-23-2014, 02:29 PM

RE: Millstone (edit 2) - by ChristopherSea - 01-24-2014, 01:18 AM

RE: Millstone (edit 3) - by ChristopherSea - 01-24-2014, 11:39 PM

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