A Sonnet for a Traveler

[ThePinsir]

I love seeing sonnets on here!

Tonight, you pass through lands unknown to me.
The air of northern steppes now fills your lungs. great sensory detail
A stranger amidst foreign lands and tongues: not too sure about the colon. a comma would probably work better
a dreamer on the shores of the Black Sea.
Adrift to change your stars, you don’t agree Great thought. Reminds me of "A night's tale!
with hopeless fate. Five-thousand miles crossed
to tread in that lost sweep of snow and frost…
to find your wandering has set you free.
You used to say this world was far too dull,
that there was nothing new beneath the sun;
but now this globe you walk… you hail divine. [/b]I'm not entirely sure I know what "you hail divine" means...
My God! The way you revel in it all!
You see the Heavens and the earth as one:
the whole expanse of space you sing a shrine.

Great meter throughout...for the most part. I really like the theme of taking control of one's destiny. Thanks for the read!