01-07-2014, 01:51 PM
Hi, I'm new to this site, so take my feedback with as much reservations as you'd like 
I appreciated the concept in your second line of the new year being man-made, almost oblivious to nature.
It might be nice to contrast the "timeless resolutions" in your 6th line to the previously mentioned resolutions in the 3rd line. I struggled to understand what you were trying to express that made these timeless resolutions different from the present resolutions that filled the air.
Overall, great job.
I appreciated the concept in your second line of the new year being man-made, almost oblivious to nature.
It might be nice to contrast the "timeless resolutions" in your 6th line to the previously mentioned resolutions in the 3rd line. I struggled to understand what you were trying to express that made these timeless resolutions different from the present resolutions that filled the air.
Overall, great job.