01-07-2014, 06:09 AM
(01-07-2014, 05:58 AM)beaufort Wrote: I guess I did kind of make it up. I am indeed saying that selfless action is an illusion and that there is really no such thing as altruism. Thanks for reading.In the rest of the poem you can interchange the words, maybe you can come up with something that works the same way for that line and still says what you want to say.
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