L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit)

L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit)

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01-07-2014, 05:52 AM

Hi, I really enjoyed this one. I'll have to read it more hoping for some meaningful critique, but I'm caught on "selfless action is illusion". I've never seen that in a crossword, and can't really understand it. Google's led me to eastern religions but I still can't make sense of it. If you're saying no action is actually selfless I can understand that, but it doesn't seem to me to fit your poem. Am I missing something? Smile

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L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit) - by beaufort - 01-07-2014, 04:59 AM

RE: Puzzles - by ellajam - 01-07-2014, 05:52 AM

RE: Puzzles - by beaufort - 01-07-2014, 05:58 AM

RE: Puzzles - by ellajam - 01-07-2014, 06:09 AM

RE: Puzzles - by billy - 01-07-2014, 07:08 AM

RE: Puzzles - by beaufort - 01-07-2014, 11:24 AM

RE: Puzzles - by ejames - 01-08-2014, 12:08 AM

RE: Puzzles - by beaufort - 01-08-2014, 12:53 AM

RE: L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit) - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 02:51 AM

RE: L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit) - by justcloudy - 01-14-2014, 04:18 AM

RE: L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit) - by beaufort - 01-14-2014, 08:40 PM

RE: L-O-V-E in the Crossword (second edit) - by Codry - 01-15-2014, 06:29 AM

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