Sleeper
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Ah, I had moved on from the dark, I was applying "should" to the cold room. I was involved in those two lines, they take some thought and imagination, they're good, but if you're back to the dark again you'd need to clarify it for me.

Sorry for my mispelling of saxophone, should have proofread, if defence is your spelling that's fine with me, big world, yanno. Smile
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Sleeper - by ChessPiece - 12-27-2013, 11:37 AM
RE: Sleeper - by Leanne - 12-27-2013, 12:40 PM
RE: Sleeper - by ChessPiece - 12-27-2013, 12:48 PM
RE: Sleeper - by ChessPiece - 01-01-2014, 04:22 PM
RE: Sleeper - by ellajam - 01-06-2014, 07:24 AM
RE: Sleeper - by ChessPiece - 01-06-2014, 11:57 AM
RE: Sleeper - by ellajam - 01-06-2014, 01:53 PM



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