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Hope Behind the Wheel
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01-06-2014, 04:01 AM
Quote:Trueenigma - line 1 is a mess? How so metrically? It's the "and I know what" part right? I screwed up an iamb and whatever I substituted is a no-no? /you're MELT/ing FAST/ and i KNOW/ what you WEIGH/. four feet: iamb/iamb/anapest/anapest. you want strong, clear iambs in your first line to establish normative meter before you start sub-ing anyway. |
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Hope Behind the Wheel - by tigrflye - 12-31-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by trueenigma - 12-31-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by tigrflye - 12-31-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by Todd - 12-31-2013, 11:04 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by saleel - 12-31-2013, 05:36 PM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by tigrflye - 01-05-2014, 08:11 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by trueenigma - 01-05-2014, 09:14 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by Todd - 01-05-2014, 10:41 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by billy - 01-05-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by tigrflye - 01-06-2014, 01:15 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by trueenigma - 01-06-2014, 04:01 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by tigrflye - 01-06-2014, 10:02 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by justcloudy - 01-06-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: Hope Behind the Wheel - by gernseeker - 07-13-2014, 12:36 AM
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