01-04-2014, 10:50 AM
^I agree. Was firstly wondering why Footsteps Echo was capitalised, though maybe I'm missing something obvious? 
Last line of S3 and S5 could both perhaps be made into two - this could aid in keeping up momentum. A positive is that it doesn't come across as too contrived, but there's always room for improvement 
Last line of S3 and S5 could both perhaps be made into two - this could aid in keeping up momentum. A positive is that it doesn't come across as too contrived, but there's always room for improvement