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The Crumbling Turnstile
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01-04-2014, 10:40 AM
Wow, this is really beautiful poem. I love the imagery in the second stanza, such bleakness yet hints of what was before. As for the last stanza, I think the "through a broken but open door" double-meaning is used really well, and flows nicely into the next line. Truly great stuff.
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The Crumbling Turnstile - by Mikeodial - 01-03-2014, 09:37 PM
RE: The Crumbling Turnstile - by Regallis - 01-04-2014, 08:17 AM
RE: The Crumbling Turnstile - by Nessfull - 01-04-2014, 10:40 AM
RE: The Crumbling Turnstile - by beaufort - 01-05-2014, 10:13 AM
RE: The Crumbling Turnstile - by oxomiya - 01-17-2014, 12:49 AM
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