01-04-2014, 12:53 AM
I will forego the "meaning" and speak to the writing. I might make some revisions...input only, bin at will.
Clothed in sin
I am off to the city. ( how sinful are these clothes?)
Bad is how I am,
and my bad
just don't sit pretty.
I'm Reverend Debauched
and my leanings
lead toward,
The expression of
all that is untoward:
which in Sin City,
is just the beginning
of my eternal reward.
There are some punctuation issues. Where is sin city?
Heart
Clothed in sin
I am off to the city. ( how sinful are these clothes?)
Bad is how I am,
and my bad
just don't sit pretty.
I'm Reverend Debauched
and my leanings
lead toward,
The expression of
all that is untoward:
which in Sin City,
is just the beginning
of my eternal reward.
There are some punctuation issues. Where is sin city?
Heart

