American Voyeur

American Voyeur

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01-03-2014, 02:55 PM

(12-19-2013, 08:08 AM)71degrees Wrote: Withdrawn due to lack of poetry

Excellent. Short and succinct. I like the "due" "to" rhyme. I especially like the way you ended it with a smiley face: ballsy and original choice.

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American Voyeur - by 71degrees - 12-19-2013, 08:08 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by tectak - 12-19-2013, 05:00 PM

RE: American Voyeur - by 71degrees - 12-19-2013, 11:44 PM

RE: American Voyeur - by tectak - 12-20-2013, 09:36 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by 71degrees - 12-20-2013, 11:50 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by tectak - 12-20-2013, 04:56 PM

RE: American Voyeur - by ellajam - 12-20-2013, 12:26 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by 71degrees - 12-20-2013, 02:03 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by crow - 12-24-2013, 10:04 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by 71degrees - 12-25-2013, 12:12 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by rowens - 12-25-2013, 06:32 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by crow - 12-25-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by milo - 12-25-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by crow - 12-25-2013, 07:32 AM

RE: American Voyeur - by trueenigma - 01-03-2014, 02:55 PM

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