Three A.M.
#1
In that space
between screen
and glass,
a spider's web
becomes
sheet music
for another
evening; snow
falls outside
in flakes
too numerous
to count; two clocks
chime the same
half hour a minute
apart, reminding me
my lover has forgotten
the words and I
am left to hum
only a melody

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Three AM

In that tiny space
between screen
and glass,
a spider’s web
becomes
sheet music
for another
evening; two
clocks chime
the same half
hour one minute
apart: a reminder
my lover has
forgotten the words
and I am left to hum
only the melody


I may have put this revision in the wrong spot. Here it is again:

Three A.M. (Revision #3)

In that close space between screen and glass,
a spider web becomes tiny sheet music
for another evening

two clocks chime the same half hour
one minute apart: a reminder
my lover has forgotten the words
and we are alone in interlude
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Three A.M. - by 71degrees - 12-29-2013, 12:27 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by Farkas - 12-29-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by ellajam - 12-29-2013, 01:27 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by ThePinsir - 12-29-2013, 09:59 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by 71degrees - 12-30-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by The Blind Daemon - 01-19-2014, 08:31 PM
RE: Three A.M. - by 71degrees - 01-21-2014, 09:04 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by DonMar - 01-19-2014, 09:00 PM
RE: Three A.M. - by justcloudy - 01-20-2014, 08:25 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by Veil of Trash - 01-21-2014, 02:50 PM
RE: Three A.M. - by 71degrees - 01-22-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by billy - 01-21-2014, 04:18 PM
RE: Three A.M. - by justcloudy - 01-22-2014, 09:26 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by ellajam - 01-22-2014, 09:58 AM
RE: Three A.M. - by Erthona - 01-22-2014, 10:02 AM



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